How do you like my poem?

huh i found this by typeing my name in the search engeen. Well any was I like it alot and dont listen to people that tell you that this is not pourtry, i think it beatifull. Very good first draft! I dont really like the very begganing like the first line, It just does not seem like a start of a poem. I like both of the single lines, it portreys very deep emotion. I also dont like the very ending, i like that the poem really needs to be longer so that we can get a clear image of why she is mad From what I get Some one murdered a loved one of this person and she is seeking revenge, but I could be totally wrong. It also reminded me or 9/11. I really like the 2 and 3 veses, and the first on is okay. I like how you worded evrey thing it gives the poem a nice rythem. Again the is an exellent first draft and please post a 2 one if you decide to make one!